Happy Book Birthday to Jennifer Longo’s new YA, WHAT I CARRY

It’s here–Jennifer Longo’s new #YA,


(Random House Books* January 21st, 2020)

In celebration, I’ve asked Jen a few questions about her book and her process. (See below.)

People, I can’t say enough about this wonderful, much-needed novel which seamlessly combines themes of #fostercare, #adoption, and John Muir!

But don’t take my word for it:

Check out this KIRKUS STARRED review–

“The power of relationship—both those experienced and those denied—is expertly explored throughout this novel with nuance and humanity. An exceptional addition to the coming-of-age canon.

At 17, Muiriel needs to make it through one more placement, then she will age out of foster care and into state-sanctioned self-sufficiency.

Muir is white, woke, and keenly aware that her experience of not knowing any family from birth isn’t representative of most foster kids. She meticulously follows the wisdom of her hero and namesake, John Muir, and keeps her baggage light. However, it quickly becomes apparent that her new temporary home will challenge her resolute independence. The island forest beckons to her. Francine, her latest foster mother, is insightful and socially aware. Kira, a heavily tattooed artist, is brimming with best friend potential. And then there’s Sean, the beautiful boy who understands that the world can be terrible and wonderful at the same time. As these people show up for Muir, the survival strategy she clings to—don’t get attached—diminishes in validity. This is terrifying; Muir has only ever learned to depend on herself. The trauma she contends with is not perpetrated by a villain; it is the slow boil of a childhood in which inconsistency has been the only constant. The power of relationship—both those experienced and those denied—is expertly explored throughout this novel with nuance and humanity. The central characters are immensely likable, creating a compelling read sure to leave an imprint. Most main characters are white; Kira is Japanese American.”

“An exceptional addition to the coming-of-age canon.”  –Kirkus starred

This PUBLISHERS WEEKLY review also has a shiny STAR–

“Having grown up in foster care, Muiriel—’Muir’—is good at packing. Per writing by her namesake, John Muir, she carries the bare minimum, and following 20 placements, has folding down to a science. After one more year, she’ll be 18 and out of the system. In an effort to have some control over her life’s uncertainties, Muir has also mastered keeping people at arm’s length by being helpful, staying out of trouble, and keeping her grades up. She’s not so good at making friends, trusting people, and talking about her feelings. But her new placement, a ferry ride away from Seattle on Bainbridge Island, stands to play havoc with all of that. Her new foster mother is smart and kind, and Muir makes a real friend, gets a job that she loves, and meets a boy who really likes her. But Muir, used to packing emotionally lightly as well, will have to make changes to be able to let people in. Longo (Up to this Pointe), a foster and adoptive parent, wrote the book for her adopted daughter, who wanted a “hopeful, happy” tale; she provides it—and the book, well-written and heartfelt, is a pleasure.” Ages 12–up. Agent: Melissa Sarver White, Folio Literary Management. (Jan.)

Time for some Q & A with this amazing author,

Jennifer Longo:

Q1 What was one of the most surprising facts or discoveries you made in writing this book?

Jennifer Longo: This is going to sound really naive, but in researching and writing this book, I was shocked at how many adults in this country know virtually nothing true about foster care or how it works, and how they believe and promote lies including the one about how children are in foster care because the child did something wrong, or the child is ‘bad’. I have had to explain to more than a few people my age that children are in care for one of two reasons: Because of the actions of adults in their lives. Or they have lost their parents or caregivers. Either way, they did nothing wrong and they need to be cared for. The end.

“It’s nothing the child did.”

Jennifer Longo: I’m not sure the people I explained this to believed me.

They learned these lies as kids themselves, probably because so many families never talk about other family realities aside from the ones they live in, then those kids grow up and never learn the truth, and they perpetuate the lies. It is really dangerous and part of the greater problem of trying to legislatively improve the foster care system. I was also stunned to learn about the lack of empathy so many adults have for kids living in foster care. The moment I decided to start writing this book (aside from my daughter asking me to write it) was when a close friend said, about a young girl we both knew who was living in foster care and who was (understandably) acting out in anger, that the child’s problem was that, “She didn’t know how to be grateful. She doesn’t know how good she has it.”

“I was about to flip a table I was so furious. But that’s not productive so instead I wrote a book.”

Q2 Do you find yourself drawing on your theater background at any point in your writing process—from creating characters or voice, to book store appearances?    

Jennifer Longo: My favorite question! The short answer is yes, absolutely. In fact, my first two novels were play scripts I wrote in grad school that I turned into prose for the books.

SIX FEET OVER IT (Random House 2014) was a play called AT NEED,

and UP TO THIS POINTE (Random House 2016) was a play called FROZEN.


And the “long answer”? 

Jennifer Longo: The structure of plays and novels is so different – a play is nearly all dialogue. There are two things to consider in a narrative, play or novel: What happens in the story, and what’s the story about. A playwright can put in all the stage directions among the dialogue they want but a director is not obligated to follow them. In fact many directors ignore stage direction completely and get pissed about it even being in the script. (Bernard Shaw writes the longest, best stage directions and I love him so much for it! But that’s because I’m a writer and an actor, not a director, and I love all the guidance I can get.) So then I go to write a novel, where dialogue is not the crucial storytelling element but it’s the thing I’m best at, I let it fly – and then my editor is constantly telling me to trim the conversations, and “Stop putting in so many descriptions of weather what is that even about also they’re called chapters not acts what is wrong with you?!”

Plays have a different narrative story structure, too. Novels are all about plot, they love external conflict, action – then I’m over here like “But in WHO’S AFRAID OF VIRGINIA WOLFE and THE CHERRY ORCHARD no one leaves the living room and it’s great!” Literally, those two plays – if you had to say what actually happens in them? Basically, some people sit around a living room for two hours and discuss issues and scream at each other. Then some trees may get cut down offstage indicated by a sound effect, and also there’s a lot of drinking. The End. That’s what happens. But what are the stories about? Oh, my god, all the conversations and internal conflict, they’re about everything and nothing – the minutia of human interaction and betrayal, and the impossible universe of the reason for human existence. It’s all there in the living room! Which can also be said for the best books – you just have to make it less talk-y. And more action-y. And take it out of the living room.

“(It’s really that simple! Said no one ever. But you get my drift.)”

  Q3 What takeaways do you wish readers will have after reading WHAT I CARRY?

Jennifer Longo: Mostly this: That kids in foster care are not “bad” or “damaged” or inherently, molecularly “wounded.” Kids living in, or those who have aged out of foster care are human beings who have actual lives that are important as anyone else’s, every one unique in circumstance. Kids living with good foster or adoptive families are not “lucky.” They do not owe the world a debt of gratitude for having their basic needs met. Like any human, kids living in foster care did not ask for the trauma they experience.

“I hope readers take away the truth that every person born is entitled to at least one decent person in their lives who loves and cares for them, and is always on their side.”

Jennifer Longo: I think the more we learn about other people’s lives, other realities, our empathy can blossom. Maybe we don’t all know someone living in foster care. But we can learn about the reality of the lives of our fellow humans. Listening to the voices of kids (First, last and always) in and aging out of foster care can help us to learn, and reading books can help. I hope this one does.

Look at the cool swag –and tattoos, to go with the John Muir references in WHAT I CARRY.

 Q4 Do you have a favorite John Muir quote?

Jennifer Longo: I do! I love the last half (and rarely noted) of the most famous of Muir’s quotes, taken from a letter he wrote to his sister. It encompass Muir’s devotion to protecting the most vulnerable of lives (the natural world) the way a good social worker or parent fights to protect their vulnerable children. Which is never easy, takes hard work and, coupled with Muir’s idea of Home being the planet all humans share as one family. This is why I love this man so much and why his words guide Muiriel’s life in the book as well.

The words are:

“…I will work on while I can,

studying incessantly.”

                                                    John Muir

Jennifer Longo: The first half of this sentence is forever taken out of context and printed on bumper stickers and t-shirts and coffee cups on Etsy in dumb fonts that make it seem like Muir was just hearing some ethereal ‘call’ to go take a nice stroll in the woods, and that is not at all what he meant. He meant the opposite – that the mountains were depending on him to save them from destruction, that he felt an urgent, parental obligation to work for them, and he could never rest.

Because of Muir’s tireless efforts, in 1872 President Teddy Roosevelt named Yellowstone (officially) America’s first national park. By 1873 Muir had climbed Mt Whitney, he explored King’s River Canyon, and he was writing exhaustively, articles for the Boston Weekly paper describing the beauty of the Hetch Hetchy Valley trying desperately to save it from being washed away by the construction of a dam (Spoiler Alert: The dam was built, and the valley was washed away forever in 1923, thirteen years after Muir’s death. Thanks a lot, Gifford Pinchot. Jerk.)

All to say, that it was in the midst of this fervor of constant words and work and climbing and exploration and literally begging people to help save these natural wonders, our Home, that Muir wrote his 1873 letter from Yosemite Valley to his sister, Sarah which reads, in part:

“The Scotch are slow but someday I will have the results of my mountain studies in a form in which you all will be able to read & judge of them… but neither these magazine articles nor my first book will form any finished part of the scientific contribution that I hope to make…The mountains are calling & I must go & I will work on while I can, studying incessantly.”

 I love it so much. Muir was like “Hey Girl, crazy busy but wanted to say hi and I love you, okay gotta get back to work saving the planet K byeeee.” Just how the only way kids’ lives in foster care are improved is when adults are not lazy, when they shut up and listen to the kids and get actual legislation passed, when the laws about helping families are made better, when adults work tirelessly for the needs of the kids, for their safety and well-being, and not to keep adults comfortable at the kids’ expense. Laziness will never do. John Muir, and any kid who has survived trauma, can tell you that. I try to live by these words.

To learn more about Jennifer Longo and her work, go to JenLongo.com (Book signing dates and locations in NEWS.) and/or follow her on Facebook, and @jenlialongo on Twitter and Instagram.

OR–join Jennifer and me for our book signing at Face in a Book, Sat. Feb. 29th, 4-6pm

and get a cool tattoo!

Meet #kidlit author Virginia Loh-Hagan and NIAN, THE CHINESE NEW YEAR DRAGON


(Sleeping Bear Press, Illus. Timothy Banks)

is the perfect picture book for celebrating–and learning about–

Chinese New Year.

It’s a girl-power retelling of the Nian legend with an original twist, which includes explanations of the origins of Chinese New Year traditions.

VERDICT: A wonderful version of a classic legend and a

welcome addition to holiday collections.

–School Library Journal


Speaking of winners (seriously!), I am thrilled to interview my friend, and author pal,

Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: 

Q1. What was the most surprising fact or discovery you’ve made as your book, NIAN, THE CHINESE NEW YEAR DRAGON, went from idea to published book?

Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: Researching the Chinese New Year gave me so many story ideas. This is such a goldmine of content. For example, I discovered the Nian folktale while researching POPO’S LUCKY CHINESE NEW YEAR.

(Sleeping Bear Press, Illustrated by Renné Benoit)

And, of course, while researching for Nian, I discovered other story ideas as well. I’m hoping to be able to write more! There’s so much to share about the Chinese New Year.

Portrait of a young author. Isn’t this the cutest?

Q2. You won the award for Best Writer in 6th grade. Did this inspire you to write even more or did you feel increased pressure to always write “winners” from then on?
Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: Given how difficult the process is, any book that gets published is a winner! I’m just thrilled that I get to write and get to see my words out there on shelves and in people’s hands. It’s so exciting to know that I created something that others enjoy. I hope to be doing this for a long time. I’d like to explore various genres and topics – there are so many options!

Q3.They say most books are a tiny bit autobiographical. Are you more like Nian or Mei?

Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: Mei, for sure. I like to think that I’m a woman warrior! Although in regard to my appetite and eating habits, I’m definitely more like Nian!

Q4. I’ve heard you were born on Flag Day in the Year of the Dragon. Does this strong and independent Chinese zodiac sign reflect your personality?

Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: I am most definitely a dragon, specifically a Fire Dragon. Fire Dragons are known to be strong, independent, intelligent, and social. They’re also known to have extreme personalities and need to work on balance. My husband says that I treat life the way I drive – all brakes or all gas. I can be pretty intense so I do need to learn how to slow down. This is why reading is so important to me – Reading is my “down time.” It’s the only time that I’m not multi-tasking. It allows me to escape into other worlds.

Q5. Since one of your greatest passions is piano, how would you compare preparing for a concert to writing a picture book?

Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: Okay. So thank you for assuming that I am good enough to play in concerts (I heart you!). In actuality, I’m not even good enough to play for a kid’s birthday party. But, I love piano and am a diligent adult piano student (grade 3-4). I’ve always wanted to learn how to play piano but didn’t have the opportunity when I was younger. I’m a struggling piano player – it’s not something that comes easy to me but I love it and I want to be good. I have the passion but not the skills. But that doesn’t stop me from pursuing it. Personally, I think everyone should do something that makes them struggle. Struggle is good; it’s productive and humbling. Both piano and writing require patience, practice, and perseverance. Also, both require performance in order to get better.

Q6. Congratulations on having authored over 300+ books thus far. Wow! Any advice for beginning, not-yet-published #kidlit writers?

Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: Grow thick skin. Learn to listen to feedback from your editors and critique partners. Be willing to make necessary changes. People think that writing the first draft is the hardest part; it’s actually writing the multiple revisions. Writing for publication is actually more about re-writing and revising. I’ve had to cut characters, cut plot lines…all kinds of stuff. The first draft is never the final draft. Also, read!!!

Q7. Do you have any #kidlit heroes?  Have they changed over the years?

Dr. Virginia Loh-Hagan: In regard to characters, I love Anne Shirley, Shirley Temple Wong, Hermione Granger….I lived vicariously through these strong girl characters; they helped me through some tough times. In regard to kidlit authors, I love L.M. Montgomery, Judy Blume, and Beverly Cleary. Over my many years as a reader, I have gained more favorites in terms of characters and authors but I always go back to the stories I read as a child. I have so many fond memories of reading as a young person; children’s books are our first introduction to the big, wide world. I learned so many things and gained so many perspectives from reading. This is one of the reasons why I chose to write for children – Children’s books play such an important role in our personal narratives. 

Many thanks to Virginia for joining me on the blog today. You can learn more about her and her books on her web site: virginialoh.com

or follow her on Facebook &/or Twitter @virginialoh.

Wishing all who will celebrate Chinese New Year next week (January 25th!)–

Gong hei fat choy.

Or, if you prefer, here’s the Mandarin Chinese: gong xi fa cai (恭喜发财).


“Favorite New Picture Books Of 2019” on pragmaticmom.com. 

Happy Reading! 

Cover reveal: DEAR EARTH…From Your Friends in Room Five

I’m so excited to share this cover reveal of our next picture book,

DEAR EARTH…From Your Friends in Room Five

(Harper Collins, Dec. 1, 2020),

with art by Colombian illustrator Luisa Uribe.

Pre-orders have begun: https://www.indiebound.org/book/9780062915320


Endless thanks to our amazing Executive Editor, Tamar Mays,

and the fabulous team at Harper Collins!

Isn’t it beautiful?

I can’t wait for you to see the whole book, but for now, here’s the scoop:

What begins as a monthly exchange of ideas between Earth and Room 5

grows into a lasting friendship, a school club with a surprising president,

and –hopefully– lifelong Earth-smart habits. 

Can you say #reduce #reuse #renew #recycle ?

More awesome news: Illustrator Luisa Uribe, who received the Dilys Evans Founder’s Award from the Society of Illustrators in 2018, is on deadline right now to finish our top secret POSTER which will also be part of DEAR EARTH.

I can already see this on your classroom walls, dear  #teacher friends. Did I mention you will find it on the reverse of the book jacket? #repurpose

Meanwhile, I asked, Erica De Chavez, our book’s Senior Designer at Harper Kids, to tell us a bit about the cover creation/selection process.

Ever wonder what a Book Designer does?

Q. Which comes first–the cover or the interior art? 

Erica De Chavez, Senior Designer: When we started asking Luisa to give us jacket-cover sketches, her interior artwork was well on the way. We had seen sketches and revised sketches at that point, and we were starting on some final colors. Thus, Executive Editor, Tamar Mays and I had a good sense of what art was going to be in the interior and what kind of image would be appropriate to best showcase that interior art.

Sorry–can’t show you interior sketches YET.


Q. Were there any hurdles or potential problems the team discussed?

Erica De Chavez, Senior Designer: We knew the concept of Earth writing letters back and forth with a class of kids was going to be hard to convey without being too conceptual. Luisa did a really great job giving us many sketch options to look at.

I couldn’t agree more! Here are just a few of Luisa’s cover sketch options… 

Erica De Chavez, Senior Designer: Ultimately though, we thought the base message of the book was most clearly conveyed in the sketch we chose (the letter above planet Earth seen from outer space). The other sketch options were so cute and beautiful, too, but we just didn’t want the reader to be confused as to what the story was actually about, which can be tough to determine sometimes. And Tamar and I were so pleased that Luisa was able to fit all of the kids from Room 5 into the postage stamp on the envelope. It is a fun, little detail and so great to see our Room 5 kids all on the cover as well as our dear Earth!

Q. I LOVE the color palette of DEAR EARTH. How were the cover’s colors finalized?   

Erica De Chavez, Senior Designer: Once Luisa’s color jacket-cover art was in, we pretty much had all of the final color interior art in as well. It was just a matter of finessing the cover typography to match with the colors of the book as a whole. I knew green had to be an option we explored, since the theme is earth conscious/ awareness habits. But we ended up going with a slightly non-conventional color of orange that really popped off the darker colors on the cover and added in some of that great art/paint textures from Luisa’s final art into the title. And I still was able to fit in a little bit of blue-green onto the cover as well. ; )

Thank you, Erica, for sharing this part of the process with us. Creating a picture book definitely takes a village, and the world that Luisa and the team at @HarperKids created for DEAR EARTH…From Your Friends in Room Five is beyond my wildest dreams.

By the way, DEAR EARTH will be in the next Harper Collins catalog on Feb. 10, 2020 –one month from TODAY.

Stay tuned for more sneak peaks in future posts.

In the meantime, please join me in trying to be a better friend to our dear Earth.



Ernesto Cisneros’ MG Debut Efrén Divided is a Must-Read

I’m so thrilled to interview author, Ernesto Cisneros, about his debut must-read, Efrén Divided. (Harper Collins) This own-voices novel will be released in six months (March 31, 2020) and the reviews are already buzzing:

Let’s see what Ernesto has to say…

Q1 Which of these quotes from Efrén Divided best describes your writing process?

  1. “I always read [write] the ending first.”
  2. “If Ama were here, she’d roll up her sleeves and wave a wooden spoon and make a milagro happen. The pressure was on.”
  3. Reading [writing] books “was like visiting an old friend.

Ernesto Cisneros:  #2 for sure. Whenever I manage to complete a scene, it always feels like a miracle. It is very difficult to find time to write so I treat every page as a true blessing.  That said, I also feel a sense of magic whenever a character grows so real and lifelike that they begin to decide how they handle the challenges you create and place before them. I then simply sit back and enjoy watching the story unfold just like any reader would.

Speaking of miracles…

Q2 Without giving away any spoilers, can you tell us if, during the writing process, did you always know how the book would end?

Ernesto Cisneros: Yes and No.  I knew exactly how the novel needed to end, but I was clueless on how to wrap up all the loose subplots. Making it all come to fruition in an organic, believable way was a milagro (miracle) in itself.

Q3: Which character is most like you?

  1. Efrén
  2. Jennifer Huerta
  3. Mr. Garrett (or one of the other teachers)
  4. Amá or Apá
  5. David

Ernesto Cisneros: I’d have to say that Efrén is what I used to be like at his age. Something that never made it to the book, but I wish could have, were my experiences as a paperboy. I remember coming home with my first monthly paycheck (from 2 routes) and finding my mom in the kitchen trying to figure out how to pay the bills and how reluctant she was to accept my money.

Ernesto has also said, “He’s based on my son.”

Ernesto cont’d: However, at this point in my life, I identify most with Apá in the sense that there is nothing he won’t do for his family. Throughout the story, we see him sacrifice without ever thinking of himself—he is the father I strive to be.

Windows and mirrors

Q4: How much does Efrén’s experience mirror your own?

Ernesto Cisneros: I’ve grown up in the world depicted in the book. I have family on both sides of the border and like Efrén, I struggle to accept why I—and not other family members—was blessed with the fortune (and obvious benefits) of being born a US citizen. Everything in the book comes from either my experiences or those very close to me.

Q5: Tell us more about the qualities that make Amá a soperwoman.

Ernesto Cisneros: The character of Amá is based completely from my real-life mother. She has always been soper (super). Whether it was finding the means to provide food, clothes or a way to pay the mortgage, she always made milagros happen—even when things were especially tough.

Q6: How did it feel to show this book to your parents?

Ernesto Cisneros: To be perfectly honest, I feel like Efrén Divided belongs more to them than to myself. They are the ones who left Mexico as teenagers to make a better life for themselves and their children. Any success I have is because of their continuous sacrifices.

When each of my siblings graduated from college, we each handed our diplomas to our parents because they were responsible for our success.

Thank you Smurf cartoons!

Q7: You incorporate Spanish in the story, in a way that allows a wide range of readers to understand the content. For example, first Apá tells Efrén he’s proud of him (in Spanish) and Efrén responds with “I’m proud of you too.” This technique lets a non-Spanish speaker understand the meaning of Dad’s words. Can you tell us how this technique evolved?

Ernesto Cisneros: Using a second language is tricky. As an author, I never want to add a translation because that’s not how people naturally speak. It’s embarrassing to admit, but I honed this skill by watching old Smurf cartoons. Yes, Smurf cartoons. If you are familiar with them, you know that they routinely use the word smurf in place of everyday nouns, verbs, adjectives or adverbs—and yet, we completely understand their meaning simply by the context.  For example, “We are going smurfing at the pool” means that they are going swimming.

Q8: Is there a question that others haven’t asked you yet?

Ernesto Cisneros: No one has asked me which part of the writing process I struggle with the most. The answer is: ALL OF IT.

Ernesto Cisneros: I don’t consider myself a very good writer. In fact, I feel like I’m not very good compared to most published authors. However, I am willing to rewrite as many times as it is necessary to get my stories to match the quality of my peers. When I was young and still played basketball, I was always the skinniest, least skilled and athletic player on the court. But I never hesitated to dive for loose balls and fight people for the ball. I used to will the ball into the hoop.  Writing is no different.

“Writing is no different.”

Yes, I’m sneaking my new book in here…

Q9: Last but not least, since my picture book, SNOW GLOBE WISHES, has just released (Sleeping Bear Press/ Illus. Claire Shorrock): If you had a magic snow globe that could grant one wish, what would you wish for?

First of all, snow globes are amazing. They let us step out of the world and see ourselves from an entirely new perspective. If there was one that could grant me a wish, I think I’d wish that people all over the world would forget about themselves and start thinking about putting others first. The world would be completely different (for the better).

Thank you so much, Ernesto–for not only answering my questions but for writing this important book!

Ernesto is a middle school teacher and SCBWI co-ARA in southern California. If you’d like to learn more about him, go to ernestocisneros.com and follow @Author_ Cisneros on Twitter.

Blog takeover: Happy Book Birthday to SNOW GLOBE WISHES by Erin Dealey

It’s a Blog Takeover by Victoria Krol, a teen writer who has questions for me—-because she’s awesome, and it’s SNOW GLOBE WISHES‘ Book Birthday!

By the way, I’m not the first author Victoria has interviewed.
Photo R was taken during her interview with Richard Peck!

Needless to say, I am honored to answer her questions.

Q1: Since the Book Birthday of Snow Globe Wishes was Sept. 15th, tell us what you were thinking about Snow Globe Wishes a year ago on September 15th.

Erin Dealey: Hmmm…let’s see…A year ago, I knew that illustrator Claire Shorrock was somewhere in the UK, working on the art for SNOW GLOBE WISHES, and I couldn’t wait to see it. I got my first tiny glimpses from her Instagram post in March–six months later!

I am beyond thrilled with the magic Claire added to our book.

It was so worth the wait!

Q2: Where and when did the idea for Snow Globe Wishes come to mind?

Erin Dealey: The story for SNOW GLOBE WISHES came to me two years ago. I was feeling more and more like the world needed a hug. About that time, my Sleeping Bear editor, Sarah Rockett, and I were talking about lovely, heartwarming books such as Winter’s Gift by Jane Monroe Donovan (Sleeping Bear/ 2004) with themes of comfort, companionship, and hope.

It made me think of the magical feeling that hits you on a morning after a huge snowstorm; a snow globe morning when it seems like anything is possible. And I got a What If idea about a child’s wish for kindness and inclusion on such a morning.

Click above image by Claire Shorrock, to view the book trailer.

This story comes straight from my heart.

Q3: They say most books are a tiny bit autobiographical. Which of the characters in Snow Globe Wishes is most like you?

Erin Dealey: The narrator is me through and through. This story comes straight from my heart. Hopefully it will touch the hearts of those who read it as well.

KIRKUS Starred review:

“The feelings of community and togetherness are palpable.” 

Writer’s Block

Q4: How do you handle writers block, which I personally find to be more prevalent when writing prose?

Erin Dealey: OK, this is a long one, so buckle up–haha. First of all, I don’t experience “writer’s block,” but I know this feeling is very real to many. I taught English and creative writing to high school and mg students (for decades!) and we dug into this topic every year.

Here are six possible causes of “writer’s block” –and possible solutions:

Erin Dealey helping young writers at an Author Visit in Brazil .

  • You get writer’s block when: You are working on a topic, usually one you’ve been assigned, and it’s not one you care about very much, if at all. (Except for the grade.)

How to handle this: Author Bruce Coville tells writers to “throw up on the page.” Get the whole story out first–good or not-so-good. I’ll add this: if it’s an essay, write down everything you know about the topic (and everything you don’t know) and then fill in the gaps. Move the ideas around. Piece them together like a quilt until they fit the required format.


  • You get writer’s block when: You are worried about the grade, even before you start writing. (No pressure there!)

How to handle this: Never worry about the end/result at the beginning. This is easier said than done, I know, but the fun should be in the WRITING. Create a world for characters to live in and then see what they do. Even if you are the only one who loves your story, give yourself permission to write it. Trust me. Not all of my rough drafts have become books…

Click image to view Max the Writer Dog’s video of Ruff (Rough) Drafts.

  • You get writer’s block when: You think what you write should be PERFECT the minute you write it down.

How to handle this: Rough drafts are NEVER perfect. “Sloppy copies” are supposed to be sloppy. Get the story out first.

  • You get writer’s block when: You’re afraid someone will LAUGH at you and/or your ideas.

How to handle this: If J.K.Rowling had worried that someone might laugh at her idea of kids riding on broomsticks and playing a made-up game called Quidditch, would she have written Harry Potter?

Who’s laughing now?

You get writer’s block when: Your life is so crazy-busy, with so many activities and obligations, that by the time you get back to the story you were passionate about, it has lost its appeal, its magic. Stories do that. Maybe your interests have changed. Maybe it’s not what you want to write anymore. Perhaps working on it isn’t fun like it once was.

How to handle this: Let the old story go. (Read Elizabeth Gilbert’s book, BIG MAGIC) Write the story that’s in your head right now. The one that won’t let go. “Marie Kondo” the ones that don’t give you joy.

If it still gives you joy (and occasional writer’s block), “listen” to the characters. Let them “tell” you what might happen next. The answer might surprise you, and/or take you in a different direction than you had planned. Sometimes sticking to the plan gets in the way of the story.  Play with it.

  • You get writer’s block when: You believe, deep down, that other people write way better than you do. So why try?

How to handle this: Forget about those other people. You do YOU. If there are stories in your head, WRITE them down. I guarantee you they won’t be perfect. Play with them anyway. Write because it’s fun.

True story: In my 10th grade English class, we had to write an alliterative poem and after I shared mine, EVERYONE LAUGHED. I was mortified. Clearly that meant I couldn’t write. (Because 10th graders are expert judges of GOOD WRITING, right?) Senior year, I took Theater instead of the Creative Writing elective. I started university as a math major, because my math teacher made learning fun. Four years later, I graduated with a major in English and minor in Art. Now I write children’s books. If you were meant to do this, I’m betting the WRITE path will find you no matter what.

Follow your path.

Q5: Lastly, If you had a magic snow globe that could grant one wish, what would your Snow Globe Wish be?

Erin Dealey: My snow globe wish became part of the jacket copy of our book: I wish that SNOW GLOBE WISHES, might inspire many acts of kindness in our world. And a few much needed hugs.

About the Interviewer:

Victoria A. Krol is 14-year old Freshman in high school with an absolute passion for reading, writing, the arts, and horseback riding. She is working on a novel with her co-partner Charley B. Ramos, which is in the midst of its second revision and currently has a plot that resembles lasagna. She met Erin dressed in full 70’s gear at the SCBWI LA Summer Conference this year, where their instant friendship resulted in her as a guest blogger.

(I told you she was awesome.)

Thank you so much for helping me celebrate SNOW GLOBE WISHES’ Book Birthday, Victoria. Look for more of Victoria’s “takeover” interviews and reviews to come!